Comments on: Pavilion Paves way for Preserving Park http://usfadvancedreporting.wordpress.com/2007/10/22/64/ Students in Advanced Reporting at the University of South Florida Thu, 17 Dec 2009 16:54:34 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Priscilla http://usfadvancedreporting.wordpress.com/2007/10/22/64/#comment-219 Priscilla Mon, 22 Oct 2007 20:25:33 +0000 http://usfadvancedreporting.wordpress.com/2007/10/22/64/#comment-219 I just hope for the school to choose any of the student's model. Interesting story I just hope for the school to choose any of the student’s model.

Interesting story

]]> By: usfadvancedreporting http://usfadvancedreporting.wordpress.com/2007/10/22/64/#comment-209 usfadvancedreporting Mon, 22 Oct 2007 20:21:25 +0000 http://usfadvancedreporting.wordpress.com/2007/10/22/64/#comment-209 very informative very informative

]]> By: usfadvancedreporting http://usfadvancedreporting.wordpress.com/2007/10/22/64/#comment-199 usfadvancedreporting Mon, 22 Oct 2007 20:16:46 +0000 http://usfadvancedreporting.wordpress.com/2007/10/22/64/#comment-199 Very good. I would just watch out with some of your attributions. Saying "according to" is risky. A lot of times you can say the person or organizations name at the end of your paraphrase, and it sounds better. just an opinion though! Very good. I would just watch out with some of your attributions. Saying “according to” is risky. A lot of times you can say the person or organizations name at the end of your paraphrase, and it sounds better.
just an opinion though!

]]> By: usfadvancedreporting http://usfadvancedreporting.wordpress.com/2007/10/22/64/#comment-192 usfadvancedreporting Mon, 22 Oct 2007 20:08:43 +0000 http://usfadvancedreporting.wordpress.com/2007/10/22/64/#comment-192 great great

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